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I wrote a short piano piece about a boy sailing a magical ship that flies to outer space. Let me know what you think!

I wrote a short piano piece about a boy sailing a magical ship that flies to outer space. Let me know what you think!

silverleavedtrees

Lovely piece! I think the beginning especially really fits with the image of a magical ship in space. I really like the descending line of the theme and how you develop it. To me, it feels like the ship is just floating in space at the beginning, then it requires more active piloting for a while as the music gets more tense (maybe it's flying through a bunch of asteroids or something?) and finally the ending feels like the ship is slowly drifting off into space again. I especially love bars 57-61. The key changes are really interesting as well. Would love to hear about your thought process when composing if you want to share, especially regarding the harmonic choices you made!


Elstree93

Lovely, your description from the review session fits so well with it starting on the sea and taking off to cruise among the starts before drifting back down to the water again.